I wondered, what went wrong?
You never called me up
Did you already had enough?
I drank some coffee and read
what all the newspaper said
But my mind just wandered
To hear your voice, I hungered
I checked my time and checked my phone
Then I sat down and waited like a stone
For the drops of happiness to rain down on me
Oh! Just how the sight of you makes me so happy!
I woke up disappointed from my day-dream
I was as alone and as miserable as I had been
No sign of you; no sign from you
Missed you so bad I didn't know what to do
The dinner was great last night
Everything had felt so right
I had made my intentions clear to you
How deeply and madly I loved you
You said, you really cared for me
You needed some time to think and see
For it seemed to you, very sudden
It's gonna be two years by June end
I could sense your heart was troubled
Just ask your heart, it's that simple!
You said you'd call me in the morning
Spend the night thinking and pondering
Morning went by real slow
What's on your mind, I still didn't know
As the day drew its curtains
My heart would sink, I felt so certain
Before the lights lit up the streets
I felt my heart skip a beat
When the ringing sound reached my ears
I didn't know if I should dance or breakdown in tears
There you were smiling, standing at the door
And I knew I couldn't have asked for more
I let you in and Time had spun
our lives together; our journey had begun
I really liked it.. superb! one cn visualise it as well :)
ReplyDeletewhen u can identify so much with a written piece - its scary...but in a nice way ...way to go LAMEooo! Loved reading this one as it was like revisiting my own thoughts :D
ReplyDeleteLipi
That is one of the most gratifying pieces I have read. It really is. Weaving the complete bitterness of being abandoned to reviving it to the heights of an ecstatic union... whoa! Love it!
ReplyDeleteGlad that you all liked it... and thanks for the appreciation...
ReplyDelete@sus: having read some of your wonderful works and just how good you are, it really means a lot... thanks.. :-)
simple and lovely..did it actually happen?
ReplyDeletethanks saransh.. no it didn't.. just wrote it down sitting idly on the bed..
ReplyDelete