where everything in life
ceases to hold any kind of meaning at all
then this moment right now seems like it...
So desperate to live a real life...
So hungry to let happiness
run through my veins and drown me in its ecstasy...
So wanting to be loved and to love...
Such desperation meets
the never-ending vacuum of a life I'm leading...
Just surviving by breathing in and breathing out...
As mechanical a man that you could find...
As empty and as lonely as possible...
It's just nothingness that greets me and meets me...
hey Ranjan...u better get back to work soon or this poetry will suck u up ;)
ReplyDeletenice take on desperation... keep up the zest!
Just happen to be a very formatted writer (you know that)... following throught processes in random arrangement is just not one of my best talents! :). The jist is cool. Words continue to be well-chosen.. Sush
ReplyDeleteKnow wat......dis one's a lot better dan ur previous one....it brings out ur feelings in such a good manner... wile reading it its as if i can feel what u must be feeling wen u wrote this piece... Good Work....
ReplyDeleteafter a long time, read something which comes right from the heart and brings lot of fresh air, cool breeze and an underlying inspiring thought, that life is meant to be lived to the fullest and move on and on... Awesome buddy... Keep depicting ur thoughts on the canvas of life like this.... Good luck... Have a great life ahead... God bless You...
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment guys or should I say girls!!
ReplyDelete@mrigs: ya, m coming back soon!!
@sush: I know, so may be the new one will interest u more, checked ur blog, pretty cool, write more!!!
@smita: m glad u liked this one.. it was a random thought.. i had one evening...
@jazz: thanks a million for the words.. you made my day!!